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How to Write an Award Winning College Admissions Essay

By Matthew Lynch
May 22, 2021
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Almost every college considers application essays to be important or extremely important to their admission process. A poorly written essay can make a college reject an exceptional student . On the other hand, remarkably written essays can help average students gain admission into their choice schools. Below are a few tips that can help you write a winning essay.

Avoid listing in your college applications essays

Unfortunately, many applicants wrongly try to make sure their college application essays include all their activities and achievements. Those types of essays sound just like what they actually are, a boring list. There are other aspects of the application where you can list your extracurricular activities, so make your lists on those spaces.

The most interesting and fascinating essays are stories with a precise focus. Your essay should reflect your passions and reveal your identity with carefully selected detail. With a thoughtfully narrated story about a challenging time in your life, you can better talk about yourself than using a list of honors gotten and competitions won. With your scores and grades, you can prove that you’re smart. Let your essay portray your maturity and thoughtfulness, and that you have a profound personality.

Express your character

When deciding the admission status of applicants, most colleges also consider the character and personal qualities as incredibly important, alongside the applicant’s essay. Your character can be detected at three points in the application: extracurricular activities you were involved in, your essay, and during the interview (if any). Your essay is the most revealing and direct of the three points for the admission units. Keep in mind that colleges are not entirely in search of applicants with all “A”s and high scores on the SAT. They are in search of good citizens to make up their campus communities.

From the Admissions Desk

Kerr Ramsay, the Vice President for Undergraduate admission in High Point University said that the nicest personal statements are centered on the student and not the person, situation, or event which are being described. Also, the admission team thinks it’s better to learn more about what the applicants appreciate the most in their lives.

Keep it a Bit Humorous

Being thoughtful and mature in your application essay is fundamental; however, you would not want it to sound too uptight. Apply creative metaphors, a few self-deprecating jokes, or a properly written witticism to lighten up your essay. Just don’t make it excessive. When an essay is written with too many puns or unwarranted jokes, it is most often rejected. Also, humor cannot take the place of substance. The major thing is to carefully answer the essay prompt; you will definitely get a bonus for making your reader smile or perhaps cry. A lot of candidates have been rejected because they did not pay attention to the prompt, hence their essay turned out ridiculous rather than intelligent.

Pay Attention to Your Tone

Besides the added humor, the holistic tone which your application essay takes is particularly important. At the same time, it is not easy to get it right. If you are asked about your achievements, writing 750 words about how useful you are might show you off as a braggart. Take time to equalize every one of your proud achievements with an act of kindness or humility to other people. Also, you don’t want your essay to be full of complaints so let your essay talk about your skills, and not about how you were wrongfully given a low score in math or not made to graduate top of your class.

Mechanics Matter

Your chances of getting admitted can be undermined by punctuation mistakes, grammatical issues, and spelling errors. Your reader becomes distracted if the errors are too many, and your essay becomes hard to understand. Even with a few errors, you could be losing chances. They indicate an absence of quality control and attention to your writing, and if you must excel in college, strong writing skills are somewhat needed.

Ask for help if you know you are not very strong in English. Let a teacher you feel close to help you reread the essay; otherwise, you can take it to a friend who is good at editing write-ups. However, if you don’t know where to get expert help from, you can get a thorough review of your essay through online essay services.

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